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Showing posts with label Fiction. Show all posts

March 5, 2016

Writefully Yours

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Like the Sunrise, some things are bound to happen!
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We are changing.

Nah...

We are transitioning !


After more than 6 years with 'Me and My Dark Side' , I have decided to move on.

The blog will now be called 'Writefully Yours'.  

You can connect with us on Twitter, Facebook, Google Plus, Prose, Facebook and Instagram.

The links can be found at the end of this post also.


Why?



Quite simply, it is the time to evolve, or at least, try to! One's work shall be a reflection of the evolution of self, the society and its sensibilities. From a while now, I had been feeling, that the brand of Dark Side and the body of my previous works, were limiting the topics and genres I could cover. Joining Twitter was somewhat liberating, as I could express myself with more freedom (while getting into occasional squabbles), but the old school writer in me couldn't be satisfied in just 140 characters!

Why is re-branding important?


As I said, I am Old School. I strongly believe that a blog shall remain true to its soul. While that might limit the spectrum of content on it, it stays true to it's reader base. I have always felt that I am being dishonest to my reader if, just for the lure of "hits", I cater them sub-par content or cover genres that aren't my natural calling.
Natural Calling

The concept of what is one's natural calling, is the essence of  the evolution of a writer. It's time for me to be more inclusive. I might succeed or might turn into a spectacular failure, but after 7 years of dedicated writing, I owe myself this chance.

This sort of transition is not the first for me. I transitioned, rather successfully, from Politically Incorrect, in 2010. At that time, however, I started a new blog altogether. But this time, it's the re-branding of the same blog.

What to expect...

  • Wider range of topics
  • More collaboration
  • At least for this year, some Politically Incorrect, posts again
  • Call for Guest Bloggers
  • Campaigns

What not to expect

  • Sponsored posts
  • Advertisements
  • Posts on senseless prompts and contests
'Me and My Dark Side' gave me the recognition, reader base and a great network of  kind and superb bloggers. We support and encourage each other across the barriers of age, gender, outlook, genres and language, just for the sheer love of  Writing. In the past year or so, I have been lucky and proud to be associated with one such group on twitter,@blogchatter. The mercurial rise of the group and their tenacity to help fellow bloggers is unparalleled and I wish to continue my association with them. 

Connections like these, I would always owe that to my blog. It might sound funny to a non-blogger, how I talk to and about my blog, as if she is a real being, but I know, you, being a fellow blogger get that :) .

Let the love of writing prevail ! Amen!

Writefully Yours,

Prateek Mathur



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January 7, 2016

Flowers


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Mallik Ghat Flower Bazaar, Kolkata
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Why are you here? What do you do, again?
I am a documentary film maker.
Docu.., what ?
Docu-men-tary. I make films.
Like Karan Johar?
A little different. But yes, kind of the same thing.
But we never see you on TV or theater? Why are you here?
I want to make a docu...umm..film..on the flower market.
Did you see Chennai Express? Shahrukh Bhai is amazing! Do you know him?

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He looked back to get his answer but turned back midway. That was an abrupt end to the curiosity and questions of my rickshaw driver. I am sure he was convinced that a man dressed like me, who has never even been on TV, despite being a filmmaker, cannot possibly know the King of Bollywood. I am confident I saw a smirk on his face when he dropped me at Asia's largest wholesale flower market.

Mallik Ghat Flower Bazaar, Kolkata.

To call something chaotic in Kolkata would be redundant.  But it still has a strange serenity in it. I have struggled to find such harmonized disorder in the Mumbais and Delhis of the world.  "Order" is an incomplete and  mortal story. The entropy of the Universe would catch up with it eventually. "Disorder", on the other hand, is self sustaining and ever propagating. It is the closest "absolute" entity that Nature offers. It engulfs stillness of every moment on its way of becoming the sole force of the Universe. I hunt for stories in such pandemonium. People who become accustomed to finding peace in chaos present the most dogged and honest face of humanity.
It is in this quest that I travel and explore stories in the busiest, noisiest and, seemingly, unlikeliest of the places.

And so, instead of making a documentary about  the Howrah Bridge, I came here.

One understands the true difference between "reachable" and "approachable" in India, only while trying to create something. Thanks to the over advertised advancement that we have made as a nation, we can reach to almost every corner of the country. But try making a neighborhood within your approach to accomplish something, and it's a different story altogether. So, first order of business was to find my "handler".

But I was awestruck by Mallik Bazaar. The beauty in this dingy Bazaar was astounding. It was not the obvious kind of beauty that one notices instantly but the one that grows on you and stays forever. It was not the high school crush who tickles sensations for a bit, but the peace of a woman one desires to wake upto for life. The roads were laden with flowers of every kind. The canvas of Mallik Bazaar was painted in bright orange by tens of thousands of Marigolds . Roses, Jasmines and Lilies appeared sporadically like colorful birds in the morning sky. I began to immerse myself in the tranquility of colors amidst the haphazardness.
    
Suddenly, a  tempo whizzed past me, hurling abuses at me in chaste Bengali, while I stood frozen in the middle of the road. I realized that I was in the thick of the action and the director in me was switched on with that jolt. I started looking for Pushpak, a young Bollywood aspirant, and my handler, who was to meet me in the Bazaar Eventually, he found me and started to show me around while I managed my handheld and the stories started unfolding.

We met  Ikhlaq, who claimed to make sales of over ₹10000 in a day but complained about the lack of hygiene in the area. He seemed worried that he would catch Malaria and wanted to switch businesses. But another businessman, known by the moniker "Marwari",  seemed hopeful. He was happy with the way the Bazaar operated and wanted to have a retail shop in the main city as well. A few inquired about the new trend of people ordering flowers on "computer" and rued losing business to the fake educated types!

After about an hour of recording and interviews we proceeded towards the largest shop of the Bazaar, owned by a certain Seth. He had already been notified by Pushpak and was expecting us. He greeted us with refreshing sharbat with rose petals in it. Seth had been in the business for over 35 years and claimed to be one of the biggest business owners of the city.

He talked at length about Horticulture. "Not every bud blossoms into a flower. One must have the eye to spot which [one] would, and that simple trick differentiates me form the rest of them", he bragged. When I asked him how he managed the supply chain of a fresh product I saw his eyes sparkle. He must be proud of his business skills, I thought. He proudly told us how articulate he has to be supplying  to nearly all the temples and mosques in the city. Marigolds to the temples and Lilies to the mosque. No mix up there!

He shouted something in Bengali and before I could ask Pushpak to translate, 4 children came running out from the back of his shop. They were all 10-12 years old boys with flimsy clothes covering them. They were sweating profusely and one look at their hands made it clear that they must have been weaving garlands. I looked behind them and realized they had come up from a basement behind the shop. He proudly pointed at them and said this was his business model. The kids collected the flowers from the farms in the morning and brought them to the Bazaar. They sorted them, made piles of them according to the orders. If a special order for garlands or wreaths or weddings came along, they would make them. Then they carried the piles back to a middleman who distributed them further. Pushpak told me that would be around a 50 km trip for the kids per day. Since every corner of the city was in reach, it looked easy to the businessman. He paid them ₹30 per day.

I tried talking to the kids, via Pushpak, but they looked tired, scared and in a hurry. I turned to Seth and asked why doesn't he eliminate the middleman and maximizes his profits. Seth looked at me in astonishment and then looked at Pushpak as if telling him how could I even ask that question.

"These children aren't allowed to enter the temples". Seth  answered.

"What about mosques? They can deliver there and save you some money, right?"

"Saab, these kids are not allowed anywhere."

He said that with no remorse. I looked at the children who had been standing quietly all this while. Something in me told me that they understood the conversation between Seth and I. They smiled at me and went back down.

Harmonized Disorder.

On the way back, I had a last look at Mallik Bazaar. Seth  was right, not every bud blossoms into a flower. The corners of the flower laden roads were littered with unnoticed squashed buds.

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This post was written in response to #FotoFriday1 a photo-blogprompt, an initiative of  team #BlogbuddyWritehouse @Blogchatter
#FotoFriday prompt posts will be put up on the first Friday of every month by team members of #BlogbuddyWritehouse 

This week's #FotoFriday1 fabulous photo-prompt 
Image credit goes to my super-talented #blogbuddy Anindya Basu 


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November 22, 2015

Signs

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 She looked at him once again. At his luscious lips , in particular. 

Filtered through her dark and beautiful eye lashes, he looked anxious but at peace. Having just poured his heart out, he looked like a man with nothing to lose.

A moment ago, he had just labored his way, through shattering teeth, snapping fingers and quivering lips, to say the three most beautiful yet potentially lethal words in the English language. 

Her lips parted for a brief second, as if to respond,  but she shut them tight. 

She raised her baby finger gently, followed by the synced pointing by her index finger and the thumb. 

Then she paused. So did his breath. The Earth too didn't move in solidarity.

Counting her toes, she slowly harmonized the movement of her thumb and the baby finger and smiled ear to ear!

Their love never needed words. Their lives would never be the hostage of communication.









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October 16, 2015

New York, New York

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He closed his eyes, took a deep breath in and exhaled till he felt his lungs devoid of any air. He did this three times. He then opened his eyes and stared blankly for a moment only to shut them again. This time, however, he did it so slow that he felt his upper eyelid gently caressing his lower eyelid and the eyelashes resting on them. In his mind he had finally perfected a real life slow motion that this moment deserved. 

He felt calmer and a beaming smile adorned his face. Upon reopening, his eyes were ready for a mesmerizing view.

That view. Oh, that view.

The sight from his penthouse on the 57th floor was exquisite. It trumped the lavish indoors that had a private elevator, French doors, antique furniture, and  oversized, sun flooded rooms. But this was all about the view. That the view was of Central Park made it even better. The fact that he owned  a $5,000,000 house in one of the most beautiful, stately and cultured neighborhood in the world capital of these virtues, made him feel like a King.

The Park was bustling with people, as usual. Those people seemed even "tinnier" from up here. He was one of them for a long time. Not anymore.

Not anymore.

This time he looked up in the sky and burst into laughter. Loud, cacophonous laughter.

Lost in his world, he knew he had made it.

Every victory, mattered in this city.

This  city. The greatest city on Earth. New York, New York.

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He stood there as if he was about to run. With his back arched, right forearm and leg outstretched, he seemed to be just waiting to hear the gun shot to run for his life. But he remained still. Motionless. Even when people went past him, hitting and shoving him, his eyes remained intensely fixed on it. It was the stare match of its own kind and none of them were giving up.

It growled. He growled back. It bluffed a jump. He bluffed a run. None batted an eyelid.

He waited, waited and, waited patiently, some more. The moment the sun came in the right spot, he started to move frantically in the same spot. Incoherence was his greatest virtue. His scruffy hair jumping up and down his forehead, his dirty knees, peeping out of his torn jeans and his bare feet thumping the footpath.

He scared it away, rather, his shadow on the sidewall did. He always knew his shadow is worth more than his being in this city.

He jumped and snatched the sandwich from the rim of the trash can scaring the cat away.

This time he looked up in the sky and burst into laughter. Loud, cacophonous laughter.

Lost in his world, he knew he had made it.

Every victory, mattered in this city.

This  city. The greatest city on Earth. New York, New York.









August 16, 2014

Knowledge...

He carelessly threw his bag on the bed. Some books flew out on the floor. He didn't bother. Not needed anymore, school year over, he thought.


 She waited for him to leave the room, kept her broom aside, picked up the books, brought them to her forehead and smiled. They were hers now.
 


Knowledge passed on.


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P.S. Originally written as a tweet reply to @harshsnehanshu for the prompt "Book". 
P.P.S. 50th post on this blog !